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August 3rd, 2003

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10:05 am - "the fish can eat a lion, the fish can eat a lion, the fish can eat a lion, the fish can eat a lion"
out of focus
help with your focus
When you think about it--

the virgin will spend some of the day in the water
even if there are crabs
and my evil twin

when i have regrets i'm at the bar
the oxygen bar

i'm concentrated with regrets
know thyself but i want to know two people
the scales of karma will turn tears into
a new designer drug

the archer wanted to bring him home
but kill with bare hands
i said
love with your bare hands
in the light
out of focus

ram a new designer drug to test market the virgin
fully know thyself what a load of bullshite

my evil twin
will love with your bear heart carrier

the water can drown you and overwhelm you
everything is larger than it appears
out of focus

got a sting of the scorpion
the morning blend
the coffee wasn't that strong
so i ate my evil twin

an appetite for the supernatural
an unsolvable mystery
the fish can eat a lion
robert stack once affirm
godet! godet! godet!
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Date:August 8th, 2003 02:53 am (UTC)
what? why are judging?
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Date:August 8th, 2003 03:03 am (UTC)
Ummm ... pardon?
Date:August 9th, 2003 04:43 pm (UTC)
I meant to say

what? why are you judging? but i was tired.

Lepetoeforcat is a good writer. Why are you starting shit?
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Date:August 10th, 2003 09:09 pm (UTC)
Ummm ... I'm not judging. I never said anything subjective about the actual poems, I just said that he should follow the rules and lj-cut them. And even if I was judging them, isn't that the point of this community?
Didn't I already explain this up^ there somewhere?
Date:August 8th, 2003 02:52 am (UTC)


lepoeteforcat is AWESOME.

Date:August 8th, 2003 05:10 am (UTC)

we must keep it going

must keep it alive
keep on writing
keep on truckin'
Date:June 2nd, 2004 02:07 pm (UTC)

Re: we must keep it going

come back damn you! i heart your words...
Date:June 5th, 2004 05:15 pm (UTC)

Re: we must keep it going

there's a whole bunch back.
feedback please.
Date:June 4th, 2004 12:34 pm (UTC)

back, but...

i dunno
written about 13 or 14 new ones
dunno what i think about the tone of them
will post them soon
and add you as friend

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